OP, don't know exactly how to explain this, but I feel you're distant from your subject.
I know this kind of protest (stationary, without much emotion) is hard to shoot, but you gotta get yourself involved and pay huge attention for your surroundings. It isn't the type of rally that will practically give you free photos (like the violent ones...), but this type of rally has its moments. You almost got something here
>>2987063 for instance.
Challenge yourself to use your wide angle lens as you're trying to use your 85mm. Get yourself close to moments like
>>2987063 and bring us more than some kind of "report" -- bring us the stories (as cliche as it sounds...).
Aside from that, you need to work on some basic stuff, like backgrounds (see
>>2987058 -- boy posed for you. You had the time to let that man in white clothes pass and clean your frame...), processing (pics overall look dull or something...) et cetera.
>>2987887>>2987952>>>/pol/ 
