>>3000712Ace lighting but the composition is really bland and uncreative. I know some spots suck pretty bad in a photogenic sense, but the trick would lend itself well to some interesting angles (maybe a la French Fred).
>>3000713Again, your lighting is spot on. I like how you composed the shot and how you tried isolating him against the dark corridor with the lines pulling you towards him. I really don't like the car on the left though. Cropping to just get rid of the car on the left while loosing a tad on the bottom and more on the top (maintaining the same aspect ratio) might clean the image up.
>>3000719Great lighting and dragged shutter. Like the first image, the composition is quite centered in a boring way. The pull of the overhead ceiling is interesting. Panning more to the left to the point where the light falloff on the right side of the stairs is just up against the edge of the frame may have been better. The lines would pull you across the frame and down the column towards the skater.
>>3001021Standard fish shot, nothing creative but it's good. The railing shadow along the bottom would have been nice to avoid but I don't know what your options for changing up that flash placement would have been. I disagree with the comment about the distorted skater. By the time you scoot far enough away to avoid distorting him you're too far away to be shooting fish in the first place.
>>3001055Fucking banger. Boring spot but you made it work with creative lighting. Really cool. An ollie is a bit on the boring side, a nicely caught kickflip would've been clutch.
>>3001060Your lighting skills are dialed. Try working on you compositions more as this is another quite centered shot with no solid composition going on.
>>3001063I can't tell if you used subtle flash lighting here of it's just natural light bouncing around all over the place. Either way, I really like the lighting and your placement of the skater.
