>>3000501unflattering angle, decent lighting
>>3001385Good photo, bad portrait. No subject isolation, distracting background, bad use of space.
>>3001436still an unflattering angle. Try shooting from a higher angle so you can bring the chin up while still getting the look.
>>3001437Good
>>3001439Good lighting, bad crop. Try and avoid hands being super far away from the plane of the face too, it's not flattering to look like Uncle Jack.
>>3001508Odd crop. Good overall but lighting is a bit weird, she looks like she needs to shave her entire face.
>>3001522Good composition but the green light should be either more or less contrasted with the rest of the face. Also learn to focus.
>>3001606Very well done, except 24mm is a terrible focal length. Look how bulged out the facial features are. If you're after a gypsy look then it's great but she looks more Jewish than my Rabbi.
>>3001659Good shot for an ad or film, not fantastic as a portrait. If you shifted right and got the subject taking up the right 2/3 of the frame with the fish tank taking up the left 1/3, it would draw the eye more to the person. By no means a bad shot, but a portrait needs to focus on the person.
>>3001937There's no way this was posed, right? Good exposure and everything, but terrible comp. Cropped just above the eyes, cropped off half the chest, too much blank space on the right. It looks like you'd just finished a shoot and the model was busy walking away when you pressed the shutter.
>>3001940The person's squinting because they're looking directly into the sun. Try backlit, or direct the subject better (which is hard because kids are little shits)
>>3001973I like this image but it's too grainy.
>>3001977There's a reason you don't do photography when you're drunk. Fun photo for Facebook, terrible portrait.
>>3002051Nice image, two problems. First the image is veeery grainy, and it would be much better with a catch light for the eyes.
