>>3014150Really no complaints on this one senpai. Except not feeling the model. Nice shot tho
>>3014152The bar is an issue. Also her neck needs to extend, exaggerate to smooth the neck. Nice pose. I think these are all underexposed by a stop tho
>>3014153Fave so far. The light is boring tho and I still think you could bump up a few thirds.
>>3014154Love the earrings she's got on but the neck again ruins it. She needs to bring the shoulder down and extend the crown of her head really accentuate the neck. Other wise nice framing, light is better
>>3014155No
>>3014156The best light.
>>3014157Feels flat like the others but I think adding a bit more contrast would help. Look and shoot in more dynamic lighting situations. Think you did well with your model tho. Loosen up a bit and the model will too.
