Nice one for trying something out, however the images seem a bit anti-climatic.
Really what you've got is a few photos of bugs crawling around or probably staying still.
Apart from
>>3016597 there isn't any movement or dynamic point of interest.
Work on your lighting a bit better, what's your setup?
Personally, I've only ever done a few photos of a caterpillar metamorphosis and so it's not the same kind of result.
Keep it up though.
