>>3027778it's better than
>>3027749but both poses are awkward. The colors feels like a natural color film.
>>3028336stahp
>>3028405nice bookeh, nice colors and don't mind your focus is a bit off. The composition is fine! about your question, it's kind, but try to keep talking to them, make them feel comfortable whenever you have a camera in hands, and try to not make much candids portraits because it somehow will scary them away from you lol
>>3028473too close, the colors don't feel right, the composition and the perspective are both bad, but you're following the right path. Try some editing to smoothing her skin, and more exposure are also pretty well welcome at this case.
>>3028500very nice!! sharp focus, and smooth bokeh. The background don't distract at all but tell a 'history'. well done anon :)
>>3029724liked the way you used the highlights on this one. focused right, nice skin tones, looks like an editorial work. Background seen perfect for the image aesthetic.
>>3030647there's something I don't like about your picture, but it's imo... right pose, good contrast for a bw portrait, the skin tone is off for me, and your image is to grainy, but not grainy enough to be an aesthetic choice.
>>3030723what the hell
>>3031184is better than
>>3031163you hit a better contrast and a more dramatic light in your second photo. The way his eyes are, the composition, it's asking for a dramatic look. good job mate :)
>>3031488try to add more contrast to yours bw portraits.
>>3031841good job, nice flash work
>>3031851the pose is kind off the scenario...
>>3031882everything you do is candids, Dill. please don't stop and share more of your photos in instagram.
>>3031956teenage 'dream' photo. direct flash?
