>>3051531This looks like it has a lot of potential but I feel like it needs more room to breathe. The restaurant is your focus but it crowds the frame. So either you get rid of everything but the restaurant, or go wider and include the roads and surrounding buildings (which are hopefully less saturated or less well lit).
>>3051559This begs for a cute girl either to be close to the camera looking back (properly lit) or far away and brightly lit.
>>3051565Has potential but I feel like there's something off about it. Pagoda building detracts imo unless you get the whole thing. I think if you went wider, closer, and lower (so that you're looking up at these dudes, with the pagoda building in the background) it would be grand.
>>3051538Nice. (even though I think buildings are boring)
I do love them though! Makes me want to visit. Also looks like you didn't go overboard on editing.