>>3054825>Phase One FXdear god you must be poor
Anyway, your background is shitty, the street signs behind her are distracting, especially the one coming out of her fucking head.
>>3054878Absolutely godawful composition.
You don't know what you doing.
>>3054869you made her face orange dude, this isn't Trump
>>3054901meh
Do the previous two of you have your monitors calibrated?
>>3054963Good edit colourwise, didn't fix the rest of the problems though.
>>3054889Not a bad crop, but I would've edited out that distracting shit in the background on the left.
>>3054917Yeah, still a shit photo buddy. At least straighten your lines and edit that colour blob in the middle out next time. Not that it would've fixed that shot. Your composition sucks, she's almost dead center both vertically and horizontally. There's either too much or too little of the scenery in the background for it to be interesting.
>>3054945She's slightly out of focus, way too fucking dark to be the subject of the image while the background is way too light. You could've blown the background out in this one since it's shit anyway.
>>3054965Don't give up though, keep shooting, keep posting.
