>>3082952Color looks better. Try shooting this same location with a more dramatic sky. Could make for a great shot. Also, might want to clean your sensor looking at your B&W photos.
>>3082972The feathers make this a little more interesting, I suppose. Try a vertical crop, you might have a little too much sky.
>>3082984Good.
>>3083001Good.
>>3083004It's not horrible, but it does rely pretty heavily on the DOF. It looks like your color balance is a little off if you're going for a realistic photo, otherwise, I don't hate the tinting.
>>3083041Yup, that's a kayak.
>>3083042Yup, that's a bike. Keep shooting, though!
>>3083065Think this would be stronger if you got closer and didn't just have his back in the frame.
>>3083066I like it, but I feel that the composition is a bit off. I think I would try to have the slide more on the right side of the frame, with the A2 still more on the left.
>>3083098Nice.
>>3083175Nice. Good framing.
>>3083188>>3083189>>3083191>>3083192These all just kind of feel like "walking around the city" snapshots with a VSCO filter applied. Your composition isn't pretty nice, but the subject matter leaves a little to be desired. Keep shooting!
