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Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:05:42 No.3085601 View View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>3085604 >>3085612 >>3085621 >>3085659 >>3085790 >>3085808 >>3085831

whatdya think of this portrait? did i do good, /p/?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:07:38 No.3085602 Report

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yeah, I like it

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:22:39 No.3085604 Report

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>>3085601
it's not good. but it's not bad.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:34:19 No.3085611 Report

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Her face is out of focus

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:38:47 No.3085612 Report

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>>3085601
Add a bit more titty and you're ready for #persuitofportriats and girlgaze lifeman

But srs not bad man aside from hair in face and focus

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:39:28 No.3085613 Report

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pick a less ugly girl next time

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:49:48 No.3085620 Report

Quoted By: >>3085630 >>3085791

It's fucking shit - quit while ur ahead photo is bad cuz girl is ugly. Enjoy this top quality /p/ tier critique

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 20:52:00 No.3085621 Report

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>>3085601
Hair under the left eye is a bit annoying, maybe zoom in on the face next time and check for stuff like that.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 21:04:36 No.3085630 Report

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>>3085620
>photo is bad cuz girl is ugly
>top quality /p/ tier critique

literally the best /p/ advice you can get

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 29 May 2017 22:07:12 No.3085659 Report

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>>3085601
I like it OP. Also girl looks pretty. Keep it up

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 01:15:21 No.3085788 Report

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>face not in focus
>Hair in the way of face
>Too much plant taking focus away from the girl

It's not good, but it's good enough for Instagram normies

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 01:17:50 No.3085790 Report

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>>3085601
CRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSHED

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 01:20:35 No.3085791 Report

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>>3085620
Yes, sounds like /p/ all right.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 01:53:26 No.3085808 Report

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>>3085601
Pretty good, OP. The blacks are a little crushed, but that's not a huge thing. You nailed a good mood. The pose is maybe a little cliche, but there's enough other detail and feeling to distract.

Keep shooting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 02:09:01 No.3085816 Report

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Not bad. Face a bit out of focus tho.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 02:51:20 No.3085831 Report

Quoted By: >>3085980

>>3085601

She looks bored

Maybe next time try and portray and emotion or have her look like she's interested in something, but in this photo her expression says she's thinking about being somewhere else imo

BJDrew !!LkyLqEm9G0v

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BJDrew !!LkyLqEm9G0v Tue 30 May 2017 05:16:36 No.3085945 Report

Quoted By: >>3086738 >>3088016 >>3088647

Please This

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 06:36:49 No.3085980 Report

Quoted By: >>3086305

>>3085831
well maybe that's how OP wanted to portray her, ever thought about that fuckface? why dont you use your brain a little before writing that stupid as fuck comment on my /p/

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 16:55:59 No.3086305 Report

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>>3085980

Was this supposed to sound "badass" in your head?

OP asked for opinions on the shot and that was my opinion. Get OP's dick our of your mouth before replying

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 17:14:16 No.3086321 Report

Quoted By: >>3090104

>bad crap
>distracting plant on the right
>probably using f16 [KEK]
>OOF face

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 17:20:20 No.3086327 Report

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>>308598
OP wanted an critique on his technique, not a shitty opinion from someone who obviously doesn't understand the difference between creative decisions & technical shortcomings. Don't fucking comment on /p/ again

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 30 May 2017 19:30:58 No.3086383 Report

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how bout this one

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 31 May 2017 10:48:24 No.3086738 Report

Quoted By: >>3086895

>>3085945
ocd kicking in, aye? you schmock.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 31 May 2017 18:26:28 No.3086895 Report

Quoted By: >>3086953

>>3086738
>calling perhaps the only remaining competent photographer on this board a
>schmock

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 31 May 2017 19:51:04 No.3086953 Report

Quoted By: >>3087989

>>3086895
>bjdrew
>competent
the fact that anyone ever believed this goes to show how amateur the boards golden age really was
bjdrew is a stereotypical rich leica dad. his photos are awful to mediocre with zero exceptions.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 31 May 2017 20:59:12 No.3086997 Report

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Looks a little soft to me, like I'm searching and searching for the focal point and can't quite find it. The blanks are creeping in a tad too much imo, but that's your choice. Like the colors. Like the pose. Like the setting.

BJDrew !!LkyLqEm9G0v

BJDrew !!LkyLqEm9G0v Fri 02 Jun 2017 20:58:47 No.3087989 Report

Quoted By: >>3088651

>>3086953
*citation required
Buttmad Anon, 2017 doesn't meet inclusion critera.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 02 Jun 2017 22:04:24 No.3088016 Report

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>>3085945
Yeah i noticed this when i imported it, bothers me as well.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 04 Jun 2017 03:48:11 No.3088647 Report

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>>3085945
Don't listen to this cuck.

Nothing wrong with cropping off the foot, more space would just make the composition more awkward due to more empty space.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 04 Jun 2017 04:04:12 No.3088651 Report

Quoted By: >>3089397

>>3087989
Burden of proof otherwise appears to be on you, Leicaboss.

BJDrew !!LkyLqEm9G0v

BJDrew !!LkyLqEm9G0v Mon 05 Jun 2017 01:53:13 No.3089397 Report

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>>3088651
Three small bits of evidence that cast shade on your claims:
1. Wasn't a dad when taking photos. Basically stopped cold when I started dadding
2. Paid for my Leica stuff mostly by buying, fixing/cleaning and selling gear and selling/licensing photos.
3. I mostly shot/shoot with Canon/Sony

Given that I've never really held my own images in particularly high regard, trying to convince a butthurt anon that one of them doesn't suck seems pointless.

elbows !feynmanQRE

elbows !feynmanQRE Tue 06 Jun 2017 07:13:01 No.3090104 Report

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>>3086321
>the only way to take photographs is to have a disgustingly shallow dof and muh bokeh

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 07 Jun 2017 01:49:35 No.3090700 Report

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most of the comments on this are from fags who think any picture with a girl is automatically gold.

picture is shit mate.
>Boring, uninspired subject
>poorly composed, cropping off foot
>Ugly, distracting background
>bored model who has annoying hair across her face
>No interesting colours or subject to draw eye to
>poor PP

Positives? Ummm.... you went outside gj?

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