>>3095653Fucking fantastic. One of the best photos I've seen posted on /p/ in quite a long time.
>>3095655Seems half worked out. The epicenter of the shatter should be placed more thoughtfully.
>>3095657Composition is a bit off. You're currently in that strange zone between perfect symmetry and pleasing asymmetry. Go one way or the other. I also think you could lose a bit of the bottom.
>>3095658Great play of shadow and highlight. Really well done. Again I think the composition could be tightened up a bit. That stole in the bottom left throws off the balance on the image with it's shadowed left and sunlight right. Nailing the final small details like that could help to push the images more into the realm of surrealism. It's those little oversights that bring an image back into reality.
>>3095659This frame is a bit too busy I think, especially after being primed by the simpler scenes in the first few images. I'd crush the blacks more and maybe burn his nose so it's totally obscured by shadows. Feels a bit out of place compared to the previous photos.
>>3095660I dig what you were going for. In this set it feels really out of place. All of the other shots have a somber vibe, while this shot has a happy drunk vibe.
>>3095661Really like the idea and play of shapes. Again your use of shadow and highlight is really interesting. With some slight changes in your position, I think you could have used the elements to create a better composition. It doesn't feel 'tight' like this kind of image requires.
>>3095662Fantastic. Love everything going on here. If I were to nitpick I'd say the bottom feels a bit cramped as her feet are nearly on the frame's edge.
>>3095663I was about to call you out on this cliche bullshit...but then I noticed those are ballet shoes. As is this image is quite forgettable. Paired with a photo of some ballet dancers walking down the street it could totally come alive though. Is there a dance school in this area?