>>3100423Pro: Model interacting with environment
Con: Distracting background
>>3100837>>3100839>>3100843>>3100844>>3100845Pro: Good model direction, very affecting
Con: I don't think these go far enough in their depravity and hedonism.
>>3100896Pro: Seems to capture a real emotion
Con: Model not engaged or engaging, poor composition.
>>3101075Pro: Boat as the subject is nicely lit.
Con: This is not a portrait.
>>3101087Pro: Good use of available natural light
Con: Too much in frame, I can barely see here face. (Maybe use a longer lens)
>>3101101Pro: Great lighting, good composition, Good model and styling.
Con: If i was pressed I would prefer a cooler light because of the dilapidated environment, and perhaps a less aloof pose.
>>3101106>>3101226>>3101183>>3101113Pro: Good diverse range of environments, Adequate use of both natural and flash lighting
Con: Poor composition, uninteresting model direction.
>>3101239Pro: Cute girl, expression looks genuine.
Con: Not a portrait, bad composition, worse lighting.
>>3101243Pro: Engaging subject, good framing.
Con. Distracting background. (Edit out the other partygoers to black, blend in a little of that UV and see how you feel)
>>3101331Same again, good genuine expression, distracting background.
>>3101274Pro: Great Tits
Con: Weird Elbows
>>3101595Pro: Comfy af, good light, decent editing, few reflections, good direction
Con: Editable blemishes. Motion Blur
>>3101628Pro: Great composition using the saplings (I hope this was intentional)
>>3101627Con: Poor composition (feet cut off), doesn't really express anything.
>>3101629Pro: Good composition. (maybe a lower angle and slightly less sky would have created more space though)
And for the love of god, stop missing focus.
>>3101634Pro: Great composition, hillarious subject
Con: Nothing really happening in the background.
>>3101640Pro: Good model direction, good setting, great light.
Con: Average styling.