>>3170560Stuff like this is generally polarizing. Overall, I can dig it, though I feel like your editing is a tad bit dull and flat. Sure, it's Portra 160, but you still need a little bit more contrast and a little stronger white point to really give it some life.
If you're into this sort of thing, you should check out the work of German photographer Simone Nieweg. She's really the queen of this color palette and subject matter. Her stuff is impeccably well exposed and well balanced.