>>3190612What was the focus of this shot? Her fingers? Her expression?
Lack of this just crushes any interest here
>>3190613If I had a week, I couldn't list all the reasons this photo doesn't work.
>>3190614Looks like a crime scene photo
>>3190616No underwear, edgy teenager smoking cig. Pass unless this is for an ad on CL "Girl needs $50 to make her rent"
>>3190617Again, no sharp focus. What are we supposed to be paying attention to here?
>>3190618Low angle and skewed at that dilutes a decent candid.
>>3190620No.
>>3191032Too far away and over exposed. Typical problem with cell phone cameras.
>>3191573She needed to be looked RIGHT AT YOUR LENS, and backround fails to isolate her
>>3191071A good idea wrecked
>>3191574Again too far away and no focal point
>>3191577Too shadowy
>>3191616I gather you used post to correct WB and exposure but come on, you should have nailed when the picture was taken
>>3191627She looks ill at ease here. You need to establish a rapport first.
>>3191671I concur
>>3193071Is this your version of that elf girl from "Lord Of The Rings" ? Sun should be MORE out of focus or you should have used a tele to give yourself some emotional distance from the subject.
