>>3228406strong subject in front, foggy background. hard ligthing.
>>3228556This is an interesting subject, but the lighting is boring and the car is distracting
>>3228479perfect technical execution, but the crooked lines in the background are unnerving
>>3228599100% bokeh = pointless. no discernible subject.
>>3228617>>3228605you need to shoot al lower ISO speeds when you're planning to convert a pic into bw. It really exagerates the noise, which is unbearable in your pictures. also, bring up the whites and the shadows. First picture the subject is in the dark.
>>3228463awesome colors, but you need to isolate the subject, either by cropping heavily or retaking the shot using a longer focal distance.
>>3228455the ceiling kind of ruins it and gives your game away. crop crop crop
also the pic is enjoyable only if you see it full size. this cant be fixed by heavy cropping because you would lose a lot of the story the shot tells.