>>3252501great pose and profile you got there, i would say the greens are a little strong but at that point id be nitpicking, nice job OP
>>3252507just an overbearingly dark photo of a maple flavored pizza joint, nothing else to comment on
>>3252522a little cliche and nothing really stands out on this one, the processing and subject is equally as boring, but keep at it, just know to ignore the urge to shoot easy targets
>>3252547the muted processing here gives the feel that, along with the snek, the photo feels dead, add some more punch to your stuff next time
>>3252566shoulda focused on the guy on the bike and not floaty, otherwise its a really forgettable photo
>>3252577please resize, no need to post this at such a large size, but otherwise, i like this a lot more than i thought i would, only thing id say other than the tard strength tier resolution, you got ample opportunity to make the gold really stand out against the green, so play around with contrast/color work a little more
>>3252634fix the processing on the blacks (keep the punch in the photo, dont circumsize it by fading blacks, its already a dead meme) otherwise i really fucking like this, top notch m8
>>3252638>>3252639i say you did a pretty decent job, its a rather busy scene and its handled with elegance, the orange lights are shining bright as they should be and take the stage for the eye, while the other elements give it room to breath, night shots are REALLY fucking hard to get down, so props dude
>>3252657>this is how most /p/ users must think i look like when i write these crits>>3252678fucking YAWN/10
>>3252754great facial pose you got there, her body stance is a tad awkward, and i dont like the editing at all, just remember to take shit loads of pics and to pick out the very best one to edit, and go from there
>>3252775yeah you really fucked this shot up good id say, everything is a jumbled mess, theres no composition to speak of and it should have been deleted
