>>3274265might wanna work on that green tint. has this photo had any editing at all? i would suggest decrease the green saturation, up the exposure and contrast a little.
>>3274273decrease sharpening.
>>3274275you know what you did. at least turn it into a square crop or something. do something to fix that balance before i fall out of my chair from tilting too far right.
>>3274279better lighting is needed.
>>3274352>>3274355if this is the first time you're taking portraits, then pretty good. backgrounds are distracting. and i feel like both of these would have benefited from framing them in the centre of the image. it emphasizes strength, stability, balance when you centre your subject. something to think about next time anyway.
also i think you missed focus on the woman's face slightly.
>>3274559i like it. if you could slightly brighten her up, i think that would make her seperate from the background a bit more. maybe pull down the brightness of that patch of grass to the right. some tone management, basically.
>>3274598too dark, and the lighting doesn't really seperate him from the background. go try it again but with different lights.
>>3274927https://youtu.be/SXFANnFKqlg>>3274957face is too hot, background is distracting, what the fuck is he leaning on, what is that pose, what is going on in this photo how have things gone so wrong. at least you have a nice rimlight.
