First attempt at bracketing
>>3295484Great light but fairly busy and uninteresting. If you're going to shoot household pets that everyone has seen a million times you need to either
>Isolate and make the shot excellentor
>Capture them in an interesting situation or expression and/or tell a story with the image>>3295497Nicely done. How much of that is vignette and editing and how much is simply low exposure?
Only criticism I'd give is put him further forward to get more light on his arse or further back to make him larger and more dramatic.
That and get low- you're showing off the interesting architecture and leading lines, both benefit from getting lower here
>>3295502Gorgeous bokeh but the wide frame makes it busy and removes any drama
>>3295505Your subject is darker and muddier than your backdrop and slightly out of focus
>>3295516Scene matches the setup/processing and lies somewhere between calm day and interested voyeur shot. Would likely benefit from colour and it needs something to pull you over onto that rooftop like a higher angle or a person on there
>>3295525Aye-aye fellow Scot. Where's this?
Saturation and clarity are OTT and your aperture is too low meaning your background is blurry but not enough or little enough to pull the scene together
>>3295533Great work on the sky and ocean, particularly the light-dark-light which pulls them into one. The composition could benefit a lot from a higher angle or standing further left but I've no idea if that was possible so neat either way
>>3295536I have a couple of shots like this and I've learned the moon isn't worth anything if it's this small. I'd go for a long exposure here and try to get some cloud trails and drama
>>3295538Temperature is a little too cold, sky and foreground would both benefit from less blue and more magenta
Like the other guy says they're also a little under exposed
Cool shots regardless though, you have talent
