>>3338043framing is a tad awkward, with his elbow being cut off and the big ol white space above his head, also try to avoid using on-board flash as much as possible, its really unflattering to the skin town and gives the whites of eyes an uncanny incandescent effect
>>3338044the colors are nice, but its just a window sill, its a pretty forgettable photo overall
>>33380454691x3411 of CRATES, lots and lots of RED CRATES
>>3338046mustve been shaking pretty hard to cause 1/125 to jitter at a standing position on a fixed subject, also watch the white balance on that skin tone
>>3338047would have worked better with someone standing their looking at their stuff, but i like the little story it made me put in my head about foreclosure or some pretentious shit like that
>>3338050oh boy i dont like this at all, the posture in his legs compbined with the rest of his proportions is really fucking weird and unflattering
>>3338051yawn/10
>>3338053avoid easy subjects like statues/flowers/clouds until youre skilled enough to make them stand out amongst the already trillions of images of them
>>3338054this has little potential, the windows on the right really outweigh the center, making my eyes want to jolt to the right instead of the guy inf ront
>>3338056nice setup for a subject to be in the middle there, without a descent subject however, its a pretty empty and tame photo of some crops, make sure there isnt any green tones in your skies
>>3338058the scope with the clouds is a nice touch to an otherwise thoughtless photo of a tractor
>>3338086rule #1 of portraiture, NEVER let the nose break the profile, and bury one of the eyes. other than that, i cant see why you took it at that angle, a little foreground context wouldve been nicer (a field he may have been running on, or some shit like that) adds depth to the photo
