>>3338622Your focus is way off. It should be on the eye, but it's focused on the jacket. Othrwise a nice composition.
>>3338623Too much NR here. Embrace grit.
>>3338624Try to get all the subject in the frame.
There's no contrast here. Just yellow on yellow in two different tones. It clashes. Study colour wheels to create palettes.
>>3338626Good. Not my taste but good.
>>3338632Compositionally good but lighting is weak, skin tones are awful. Try to get better definition in your photos. Use lower iso
>>3338633Good. Still a bit mushy. Invest in better gear, I think you deserve it.
>>3338634Missed focus. It's on her nose and lips while the eye is out. Don't be afraid to stop down to get ear to ear in focus.
>>3338646See the other yellow one.
All in all not bad, but remember it's easy to photography pretty girls. Drive yourself to improve from a technical standpoint and to raise consistency in work. That's how you really start to get return business from clients.
And stop shooting niggers
