>>3367546you missed focus and you STILL post it here ?
>>3369670nice shot, eyes too dark for my taste and theres too much hair goinf everywhere
>>3369674I don't understand that composition, what do you want the viewer to look at first ? The glasses and the lips pop out but that's it. The background is t blurred to be meaningful but present enough to be annoying.
>>3369684simple and clean, I like how subtle you went with the retouching
>>3369706she look asleep. You could've done more with these leading lines
>>3372356>>3372358you want to impress but you're too tame. these two are just boring. Go big or go /b/
>>3374340why f/8 though? You have daylight and the background is boring with those lines going everywhere. Open as far as possible in these cases, makes the portrait more intimist too
>>3374351Cool hipster shot, not my thing but the style is popular
>>3374375missed a nice opportunity to use central symmetry here
>>3374802I like this one, but I'd like to see more context for some reason
>>3364891I don't get what you were trying to do here
>>3364889It's a mess. too many black/white opposition and the lines don't serve your composition well imo. I like the intention a lot though. Keep shooting.
>>3364589nice misunderstood mexican poet from the 60s look
>>3358689>>3358691learn to edit photos from professionals, get off youtube and buy some Retouching Academy tuts
