Too many pics since the last time I commented.
>>3375878Odd lighting, but neat subject for being at some sort of event. The subject looking off camera at something is a good composition.
>>3375879Not bad. Good lines, except for the right side that is leaning. Fixing that in post or using a shift lens would make it look a lot better. Though, I'm not sure how well it can be "fixed" so to speak. Regardless, it is pretty good. The people in it are a bit boring unto themselves.
>>3375880I'm not getting anything from this one for some reason. I think it may have to do with the angle/perspective. There was probably a good composition somewhere just to the right further. It probably need some rule of thirds going on to get it right.
>>3375976Don't crop, just straighten it. It is pretty good otherwise. It may have been a bit better at a lower angle so the area above the stairs was not cut off as much.
>>3375994This is pretty good. The negative spaces, the juxtapositions, the asymmetry all work. It would probably also do well in black and white.
>>3376128I think the plant barely covering the light is detracting from this. It would be better if more of the plant was covering the light or only the bottom leaf was covering it. Having just a little bit of the flower parts covering it isn't good. The pen and other stuff are a bit too close for the same reasons.
>>3376139A different angle might have been better, but I don't know what that would have been. I think it became passe from being so well centered without something to juxtaposition with...
>>3376348Not bad, but the bottom section in the foreground really detracts from that. There's a chance that cropping the bottom out and making dark boarders would help fix that in some manner. It is a good subject and I don't see anything else wrong. The single vehicle, the lines being straight and lights with that exposure are pretty good composition.
>>3376349I think a different subject would have been better.
