>>3419768Generally speaking I think you have a detached eye for geometry. I feel your photos to be a bit cold and distant, which is more about taste than anything, but I generally enjoy the composition. Very good, in my opinion.
>>3419768Quite far from that person. I like how those lines connect in the low right.
>>3419770>>3419771Would be alright as connections in a series.
>>3419772Again very distant and detached. The two standing figures by the lamppost are a bit in an indecisive moment, but there's something about the placement of the others that feels… correct.
>>3419774Darkening the left part of the photo was a correct decision in editing, but I feel like it was a heavy handed try at saving an otherwise unremarkable composition. You used the whole frame in the other compositions, so this one feels easymode, even if the part where you want to concentrate attention works ok.
>>3419775It's nice that you hanged around
>>3419772 looking for opportunities, but this is a bit eh.
>>3419776Abstract geometry, again ok as connection but on its own, eh.
>>3419777Not even trips could redeem this one, I don't understand why you picked it.
>>3419778That shadow on the wall messes up the balance of the two girls. I guess the light couldn't stay like that forever, but it shouldn't be too hard to get another opportunity.
>>3419779Ah, finally getting close!
>>3419780>>3419781>>3419782Again, good comp but it's not enough to make them stand on their own.
If this is scraping the bottom of the barrel after a few months I'm curious to see what your first picks would have been. Keep posting.
