Constructive criticism:
>resize your images when you post here>watch out for image noise (your camera sucks)>straighten your photos>learn about the rule of thirds>find interesting things to take a photo of, not random, uninteresting scenes (especially in >>3420120)>learn how to edit your photos in an editing program such as lightroom >get a much better camera>>3420128This is the only image that is semi-worthwhile.
Go back out and try to take this again, but try to get a better camera (look at refurbished options from Canon/Nikon/Sony if you're short on money), mess around with longer/shorter shutter settings, put the camera on a straightened tripod, and center yourself as much as possible.
