I get the whole topo and the 'aesthetic of the banal' thing that's made a resurgence with the kids to day, but let me let you in on a secret. You're actually supposed to make the banal look interesting and evoke some sort of feeling. You actually need to have strong feelings/thoughts towards what might be considered mundane and find a way to communicate it. You're supposed to chase the substance, not the style. The style will come along with it. Fucking kids mayne. Stop parroting styles. Whether it's lifestyle orange-teal bangers, or topo hipster shit, find your vision, make sure you've articulated it to yourself and find a way to communicate it to the rest of the world. But then again, maybe I'm just being a cunt and you're just practising and 4chan isn't exactly the place that requires heavy self-curating so you're dumping everything.
That being said, I am okay with
>>3422211 (well balanced coupled with the sunlit concrete/gate give a human face to modernism/brutalism and make me think the cold movement had good intentions after all - same here
>>3422212, but more abstract); this
>>3425007 and this
>>3427611 (just the juxtaposition of textures; the former is a bit too flat, I get that you're trying to be 'boring' on purpose, but it's waay too flat); this
>>3427613 (human establishment integrated serenely into the natural landscape, noice). Looking forward to your slides