>>3494431>>3494432>>3494434I posted these.
Will give feedback sporadically.
>>3483320her face seems out of focus
>>3483354This is really cool
>>3483390Way too much post editing, that skin looks so fake
>>3483667Your model is working a bad angle, never chin from below unless you have a perfect jaw
>>3483692Not very interesting, don't know what else to say, I'd blame her face, she's not doing any eye catching expression
>>3483697I find this a bit too noisy. Try getting a flash with a diffuser on it, position so it doesn't reflect the glasses as much. You'll have less noise.
>>3483793My gut is that it is trying too hard. The paint pallett looks fake too
>>3484199Oh fuck ya, this is cool
>>3484234I'd almost say a bit too much vertical space but still really well done
>>3484941This is your best one
>>3485119This is unreal, great work all around, angle and framing is on point
>>3485572I think this could have been better without his and in his face
>>3485573Best one, sort of wish he wasn't looking like a pyro
>>3485574Bad angle and maybe bad f stop choice
>>3487152Love it
>>3486880no
>>3491764I like this one
>>3491774Fuck I hope you're a pro
>>3491879This one is cool
>>3493263I can't help the feeling you're a stock photo photographer
