>>3491573Not the same guy, and I actually liked your pics, but what I would change:
- No contact lenses, unless you actually want them to show on the pic for some reason.
- Too much of your camera reflected on the first one. This can be used for good effect, but this is not the case. Try to be on the shade with light pointing to the eye, so you are on a darker place than other reflections.
- Keep trying to nail the focusing. The first pic was focused quite a bit in front of the iris, and the second is a bit off too, to a much lesser degree.
