>>3509343Thanks for the great constructive feedback. I've kept this in mind while shooting earlier today.
>>3509345Thanks buddy
>>3509416Thanks for the kind words
>>3509473yes I'm home developing and having some issues sometimes, but slowly my results are becoming more consistent. I develop in an sp-445 tank with ilfosol 3. And yes it's an intrepid 4x5 - I spotted it in a second hand shop with tripod, lens, and a darkslide included for £300 last year - finally started to use it recently.
>>3509479Thanks, I have some 120 film (kodak ektar) that needs scanning hopefully that'll be a bit more saturated.
>>3509546Thanks for the feedback - I agree with poor composition in the first and 3rd especially, although a few people I've shown these to have pointed them out as their favourites. Since those first developments I've started to use an app called Viewfinder to help with composition, and it's an incredibly useful tool.
I have no real concept behind these shots besides being compositional exercises and opportunities to refine my development technique before I begin some projects I have in mind.