>>3581332great example as to why rule of thirds doesnt yield great images. Theres little to no seperation of the subject from the dark background here, and hes reaching for...what? Theres no tension.
>>3581170this is the better of the 3
>>3581171decent, not sure I like the foreground elements that much. consider cropping to just below the plate on the ground
>>3580606good drama, though the building could use more burning.
>>3580541not enough contrast between subject. subject is boring.
>>3580277consider returning to this scene and recomposing. the contrast in color and brightness is good, and its decently composed, but i feel like there could be more to this image.
>>3580219decent snapshit, if boring
>>3580216>>3580218not interesting.
>>3580199shot has been done a million times before. its always nice to have your own image of the moon, however.
>>3580086good composition, good contrast, good sharpness. I like it.
>>3580073crop your image the black frame lines are useless
>>3580024why post this at all?
>>3580020alright lets get in depth with this one.
Your main subject is the girl in the center. She has the biggest contrast in the image, and all leading lines go straight to her, but shes not in focus.
The woman on the left is also bright and contrasty, and shes the one in focus, not your subject. The big fucking light in the top right is hella distracting. In fact, the whole top of the image just makes the space feel more claustrophobic than it already is, and it betrays the scene which should have been festive and warm.
Stupid, fucking, borders. Get reid of them
Color contrast is fucked, your reds look like you pissed blood on turds and everyones face looks washed out. This is what your shot should have looked like
