>>3927546If you are doing night time stuff get a tripod and learn to be patient. Plan your shot in advance then arrive just before twilight, set up and then shoot every minute or two as the light fades. Also bracket your shots, you can never second guess a mixture of lights.
The buildings on the left look like office buildings. Could you choose a time when there might be lights on? Like wise traffic, think about the day of the week/traffic density. Your shot has a very late Sunday afternoon vibe.
Avoid large expanses of blank wall unless there is good reason for it. I can see no good reason for the right hand quarter of you pic.