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Anonymous Sun 22 Jan 2023 16:16:36 No.4128094 View View Reply Original Report

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I am new to photography what do you think of my picture

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Anonymous Sun 22 Jan 2023 16:43:20 No.4128103 Report

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>>4128094
You should enable gridlines in camera so you can center compose and not get the plates at the bottom and persons leg at the top.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 22 Jan 2023 17:04:02 No.4128113 Report

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your sisters leg is in there

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Anonymous Sun 22 Jan 2023 18:14:49 No.4128146 Report

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>>4128094
The lighting is right where it needs to be, the dish is beautifully composed and looks clean and delicious. I like the choice of background/tablecloth but unfortunately there is a lot going on around the edges; like somebody’s leg over the side of the table. if you were to shoot this exact thing again do whatever you got to do to to show nothing but the flat tablecloth around the dish. Also as someone mentioned, pay attention to grid lines or the edges of the screen to line up your perspective

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Anonymous Sun 22 Jan 2023 18:33:01 No.4128160 Report

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>>4128094
>what do you think of my picture
I think it was shooted by an overweight med.

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Anonymous Sun 22 Jan 2023 18:37:42 No.4128162 Report

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>>4128160
>overweight med
>slices of cheddar, cow mozzarella, fucking crackers and sterile pasteurized soft cheese
>apples
>no olives
>no aioli
>no tomatoes
>no ham
Nah I don't think so

>>4128094
In addition to what others have said, put some more effort into arranging the food
the sausage slices and the grapes are right where they need to be and the soft cheese is arranged very nicely
The crackers are quite chaotic (although I like how they form a diagonal) and the cheddar(?) slices can't make up their mind on whether they want to stay in line or not. The apple slices could use a little more order, same for the upper mozzarella slices

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 22 Jan 2023 18:47:10 No.4128165 Report

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>>4128094
Looks delicious. I like the lighting and the framing excluding the top. Blue compliments the orange and yellow tones. I feel like the image could be a tad bit sharper, maybe stopping down or refocusing would help.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 26 Jan 2023 17:11:12 No.4130035 Report

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>>4128094
Did you even try at all?

I mean, you obviously made an effort when you arranged all the food, which looks excellent, but it looks like you just checked out completely after you had done that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 27 Jan 2023 15:58:47 No.4130464 Report

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>>4128103
Or, just, you know... crop it.

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