>>4198097You're pretty good at light and colors, but you need to work on composition beyond just that. Many of these shits make for great background elements, but lack a clear subject, or fails to put the subject in a good spot.
You might also benefit from a bit more self-censorship, because you have a couple of shots which are much better than the others.
I'd keep these:
>>4198097Too bad about the lack of sharpness
>>4198100Very cool shapes and curves, but lacks a clear subject
>>4198104Could have been great, if you got the face to appear more clearly.
>>4198105Bad framing. Leave some space above their heads.
>>4198108Same problem as before - If you had gotten the face to appear more clearly, it could have been quite good. Also, too bad about the overlapping monks. If they had been spaced out just a bit more, they wouldn't have ruined each others' silhouettes.
>>4198109Pretty good, if a little boring.
>>4198112Why did you make this purple? Fix the WB and edit it a bit, and you might have something interesting here.
>>4198115Missed the focus. Could gave been good, but the scooter gets all the attention.
