>>4210895This would look more intentional if you cropped it.
>>4210919Un situations like these, try shooting at lower ISO and hope that you can save the underexposed image in post. As it stands, it's a bad pic of an interesting subject, even if the timing and composition is pretty good.
>>4210772This could have been absolutely excellent if you had managed to compose it. The subject matter, the light and the colors are all great, but the compinis just bad. If you can't get closer (understandably, if you don't have the lens for it), at least try to get lower.
>>4210731This is just not great in general, but a brginner tip here is to lower your f stop considerably. With noisy background/foreground elements (vegetation is particularly bad), it's usually the only way to isolate a subject under flat even light like that.
>>4210682The grass isn't a bad idea, but don't cut ONE straw right on the face. Also, tell your model to relax, talk about something, hum a song. Trying to force a smile staring blankly ahead is hard.
>>4210656At keast straighten your image, you lazy badtard. This could have been fairly good, but the tilt makes it look like a random lucky snapshot (which it probably is).
>>4210568I aooreciate that you tried something interesting here. I fon't love it, but it looks like you tried and got something decent out of the composition.
>>4210469Nice soft colors, okay low angle through the grass. Should have snapped more in yhe hopes that the birds would pose better.
>>4210411This could probably benefit from some editing. It's an okay composition, but it looks flat and dull. A lower f stop would also have helped to filter out the ugly grass bank in the background.
>>4210284Good contrast, even if it's just your dumb feet.
