>>4311246Very nice, I feel like there's a bit of imge that's left unexploited here though, maybe trying to edit it further can get you somewhere; we barely see the bird now unfortunately
>>4311247baby
>>4311237Amazing stuff going on there with the bird taking flight and the old man, but you're trying to show both and result in actually bringing our attention to neither
Maybe a 16:9 crop, or only focusing on the man and his smoller birb would have been beneficial
>>4311253pretty good, light colours, well put in the frame; 7/10 would put on the second page of the papers
>>4311257Love that one, though maybe I'd crop it in a bit, very good use of wide angle outside
>>4311259Very cute, sharp, intemporal/10
>>4311261Would like this more if it were black and white or normal colours, but it's very nice, not too much of the Shirakawa Go cliché and good lines
>>4311284aaaaa the pain
>>4311292Not bad, Moriyama style snap, with less contrast
>>4311307If you get a choice between making the blurry subject blurier, or the clean text sharper, go for the text; it doesn't matter that you didn't focus closer to it, and now we have this barrier of out of focus details in the front that makes us look behind it, where there's unfortunately nothing much to see
Some good photos in there, good job Anon!
I like the vibes, I hope you had a good time exploring Japan and seeing Miyajima!
Hiroshima best prefecture
If I can give some advice, it's that sometimes I don't really know where to look, my eyes have a hard time latching on to the composition in your images; I like using the rule of thirds to give directions for the eye to follow, when I don't have an obious subject, such as a human
If you have more, do show!
