>>4466673Kek
You gotta appreciate OP's effort for this.
>>4466628Anon these fruits, vegetables and cheese should be in semi rotten state and filled with worms and shit. Your lazy ass has just taken few bites out of it. Your staging of these objects is shit. Also find a nice old wooden table and use yellow light like classical painting.
Ditto copy your favorite Vanitas paintings. Just copy everything and also its aesthetics, mimick it as best as you can and when you understand the process try to add in your own ideas. You will learn more that way. Also you need deep focus(meaning everything has to be in focus within your frame).