/pw/ - Professional Wrestling » Thread #15641178

[20 / 4 / 1]

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 00:32:40 No.15641178 View View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>15642327 >>15642343 >>15642386 >>15642943 >>15643858 >>15644052 >>15644502 >>15645964

SOME PEOPLE CALL ME THE NO DIMES COWBOY YEAHHH
SOME CALL ME THE GANGSTER OF TARPS
SOME PEOPLE CALL ME TRANNY
CAUSE I DILATE BEFORE EVERY SHOW

PEOPLE TALK ABOUT ME BABY
SAY IM DRAWING NO HOUSE DRAWING NO HOUSE
WELL START TO WORRY TONY START TO WORRY
CAUSE KENNY'S RIGHT THERE RIGHT THERE RIGHT THERE RIGHT THERE AT HOME

CAUSE IM A SHITTER
IM A FLIPPER
IM VANILLA
AND IM A MIDGET
I WRESTLE 5 STAR MATCHES FOR NO OOOOONNNNNNEEEEEE

TAKE A XANNY
JOB TO SAMMY
CUZ IM A FUCKING TRANNY
I SURE DON'T WANT TO DRAW NO DIMES

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 01:37:11 No.15642327 Report

Quoted By:

>>15641178
Based

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 01:38:27 No.15642343 Report

Quoted By:

>>15641178
Not cool, Phil. Its 2024, you cant just whip black people

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 01:41:03 No.15642386 Report

Quoted By: >>15645750

>>15641178
Weird that the e-drones here don't do parodies for songs written any less than 30-40+ years ago. are they really 50 years old watching a PG show for children?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 02:10:33 No.15642943 Report

Quoted By:

>>15641178
I think everyone is calling him the No Dimes Cowboy

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 02:52:03 No.15643684 Report

Quoted By:

kek

Anonymous

View Same Google ImgOps iqdb SauceNAO 2024-08-12 21_15_14-ETERNAL TV.png, 2MiB, 1151x1048

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 02:57:36 No.15643780 Report

Quoted By: >>15643869 >>15643874

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 03:00:07 No.15643815 Report

Quoted By:

Wow what a surprise! Chad loses again

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 03:01:53 No.15643858 Report

Quoted By:

>>15641178
would breed

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 03:03:06 No.15643869 Report

Quoted By:

>>15643780
I love WWE

Anonymous

View Same Google ImgOps iqdb SauceNAO stretching maxxine tummy.jpg, 1MiB, 2560x1440

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 03:03:27 No.15643874 Report

Quoted By:

>>15643780
lick maxxine tummy
tickle maxxine tummy

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 03:20:38 No.15644052 Report

Quoted By:

>>15641178
zesty mf

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 04:20:02 No.15644502 Report

Quoted By: >>15645278 >>15646583 >>15646625

>>15641178
alright let's do this
>pros
i like the concept. it's easy to see how you got to this parody with the whole space cowboy line.
i think it's a pretty ubiquitous and fun song. kind of old, but i feel like if you're on this board you probably know this song.
you did four whole stanzas and that was ambitious. what's more, the last one is really pretty brilliant. well done!
>cons
well, your meter is just all over the place. the original song has a pretty cool cadence to it, and you're pretty inconsistent with the syllables. clean that up for sure, especially in the first stanza because the first stanza is the most important one.
i think the third stanza could use a little work content-wise. hangman's like 6 feet tall, not exactly a midget. also he doesn't flip, but i get that you need it to round out the whole flippy vanilla midget thing. honestly, i think you just change that whole part except for the last line.
this is a minor thing, but did you base this off of like the second chorus or something? why do you have right there so many times? i think just do it once for clarity. your rhyme scheme is already off, so why make it more complicated, right?

now, i'm gonna pitch you an idea here. hangman is always taking time off, right? there was that rumor around this year's all in, there was that time right when he was about to become the aew world champion, i'm sure we can find a third time somewhere. why not add that in?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 06:29:05 No.15645278 Report

Quoted By: >>15645685

>>15644502
what about this one
>>15641489

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 08:06:44 No.15645685 Report

Quoted By:

>>15645278
i'd give that a 9/10.
>pros
we all know the melody and we all love kingdom. add onto that the subtext of this being cody's song and the cut is just that much deeper.
lyrics are clever. in particular the tony doing blow line works really well and then goes right into the tarp line, which i think is pretty clever.
it even sticks pretty close to the original words which just makes it that much snappier and intuitive to sing along with in your head.
>cons
i think the first line could be better. "flippy shit in my soul"? i mean, come on. we all know that could be better. then again, i guess there's an argument that the "in my soul" part is the way that you immediately know it's kingdom. still, that sticks out to me.
it might be a little too topical. how long is the board gonna be posting about all in? you can't even repost it next year because next year the show won't be at wembley. i think you get a couple of weeks out of this at most. then again, maybe that's what the post is going for. might not necessarily be a flaw. longevity doesn't always have to be the game.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 08:27:23 No.15645750 Report

Quoted By:

>>15642386
Well, you know what this song is, so how old are you?

Anonymous

View Same Google ImgOps iqdb SauceNAO 1708273506305369.png, 3MiB, 900x1200

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 09:23:20 No.15645964 Report

Quoted By:

>>15641178
>I want to fly like an eagle, to the E
>Fly like an eagle
>Let the joshis carry me

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 11:36:06 No.15646583 Report

Quoted By:

>>15644502
based

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 11:45:41 No.15646625 Report

Quoted By:

>>15644502
>but did you base this off of like the second chorus or something? why do you have right there so many times? i think just do it once for clarity. your rhyme scheme is already off, so why make it more complicated, right?
it's the second verse you pseud

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Aug 2024 11:56:37 No.15646667 Report

Quoted By:

This was dimeless the first time you posted it. Now it's even moreso.

Capcode	All Only User Posts Only Verified Posts Only Moderator Posts Only Manager Posts Only Admin Posts Only Developer Posts Only Founder Posts
Show Posts	All Only With Images Only Without Images Only Spoiler Images Only Non-Spoiler Images
Deleted Posts	All Only Deleted Posts Only Non-Deleted Posts
Ghost Posts	All Only Ghost Posts Only Non-Ghost Posts
Post Type	All Only Sticky Threads Only Opening Posts Only Reply Posts
Results	All Grouped By Threads
Order	Latest Posts First Oldest Posts First

On these archives

Your latest searches