Hello. I'd like to hear your thoughts on a new screenplay I'm working on. It's about wrestling.

>Winter 2028. Hayden Coalchud and Carlos Goonzalez sit in their airship, looking at the ruins of Los Angeles.

>Why'd you have to choose me? You could have chosen anyone else. A nice girl. I'm not like that.
Why do you keep bringing this up. I saved you. Did you forget? I thought you understood. I saved you from all of this. From everything else. Don't you understand it's bad?
>I wish you hadn't chosen me. I wish I would have just died along with everyone else, that day. I'd choose anything but this. Can't you make it end? Please. Make it end.
After everything I've done for you. I care about you. I love you. I'd go through anything for you. Why can't you recognize that. Tell me what I need to change about myself. Anything.
>Stop it. You don't need to change anything. It's me, not you.
Don't lie to me, or I'll punish you again. Tell me what I need to change about yourself.
>Well... you can't change it. The way... you look. Your face. Your eyes. Your hair. Your body. It's not you, it's me.
I knew it. After everything I've done... after everything I've endured. I knew you were like that. You're just like all of them. You're not grateful. I should have just let you burn, with them. But no. Now you'll face what I have for you. And it'll be worse. I didn't want to do this. Any of this.

Thoughts? Do I have what it takes to be a writer for the dub?