>>4727684Big improvement over the OP but can be taken even further. He needs to really show passion for the things he's ordering which builds up as he picks more things until he's absolutely salivating over everything.
>>4727743It's really simple and I don't understand why these guys don't get it. Him, Big E, Darby, they all have a type of character they want to portray, and they're all fine, but they need to be able to add intensity and fire up as the promo progresses. Keith can start with the greetings and salutations, then the other guy says something, or just thinking about the other guy starts getting him hot, and he's getting louder and louder, and starts talking about how he's going to whoop the guy's ass, etc... Same with Big E, start with the comedy, then blow up and start ripping on the guy. Darby can be kind of stoic, then his other side comes out and he gets intense.
