>>5207743You've got a good base, but you want it to flow more naturally you need to match the syllables as much as possible. Here's an example from the thread were Sunny killed a guy.
>ADRENALINE>IN MY SOUL>SUNNY IS OUT OF CONTROL>FLOORED THE PEDAL USING BOTH HER FEET>SHE TRIES TO STEER>BUT NO GO>SUNNY DONE WRECKED THIS GUY'S AUTO>WINDSHIELD BUSTS, FLIES OUT THE RIDE, HE'S GONE>WHOA-OH>YOUR HONOR SAYS, YOU ARE A DRUNKARD>BITCH YOU JUST KILLED A MAN (KILLED A MAN)>SHE TOOK IT ALL AWAY ON A SATURDAY>WHEN SHE FUCKED ELMO>NOW SHE DRIVES AWAY, ENDS A PERSON'S DAY>DRIVING ILLEGAL>NOW THEY'VE CUFFED HER HANDS>THEY TOOK HER DRUGS AND ONLYFANS>THEY'LL FOLLOW HER INTO THE PEN>WHERE SHE'LL GET FINGEREDRolls off the tongue nice and naturally. I'd also refer to Evolutionposting to improve your lyrics game.
