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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 11:25:38 No.5447235 Report

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>this is what the trad anti government alt right cares about

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:00:20 No.5447371 Report

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:29:33 No.5447464 Report

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I'll be honest, OP, the scene moved way too fast and desperately needed more pre-story and interactions between the two, before you went to the main course

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:32:00 No.5447474 Report

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For the anal scene I agree, but I wasn't sure if I was gonna do a Chapter 2.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:33:17 No.5447478 Report

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post the story here, that site looks like a honeypot

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:34:33 No.5447480 Report

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>>5447474
I mean for the BJ scene, too. He goes straight into making her suck his dick without any real kind of conflicted feelings, his motivations solely being that he gets no pussy at college. Most of this is dealt with in an accessory sentence here and there.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:35:20 No.5447483 Report

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That's Archiveofourown, a very popular fiction site. I also put it on AdultFanFiction, an OG porn fanfic site.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:36:23 No.5447488 Report

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>>5447480
Fair enough, and I saved your posts for reference.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 12:37:30 No.5447493 Report

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>>5447488
Granted, I don't speak from story experience, but RPing, rather, so take what I say with a grain of salt. There's a writefag thread on trash where you could ask for advice, too, I think.

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Anonymous Tue 26 Apr 2022 13:21:20 No.5447668 Report

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http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096751

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