>>5794358>I think a good idea would be to throw us into training.Pic related. That's what Itachi did, full natty.
To be honest, I planned on putting Itachi in your class when I was making my setting bible in google docs before starting the thread, decided against it because I examined the timeline and I couldn't make it fit ergonomically with the general plot outline. Wasn't worth it. He would have been around to mog the fuck out of you in semester one before graduating immediately, but it would have fucked up the tone. I also wouldn't have been able to justify avoiding his plotline if I made him directly relevant to you.
As far as Sasuke
>>5794377Yeah, we're gonna mostly let him drift into the abyss. He's not my concern. My intent is to conform to canon pretty closely, but while telling my own story in the universe. Some events are going to get *added* because you guys need shit to do, but nothing is getting subtracted by our passing, if that makes sense.
Add on, don't change. That's what I want.
>>5794362>Taking advantage of a setting without making swathing changes is a problem many fanfic/quest writers fall into.To be fair, I did make some swathing changes. The changes I made are mostly cosmetic/cosmological though to be sure. They won't influence events strongly, just how I get to describe them.
>>5794319>I bet we'd be faring better right now if we went Ninja build instead of Will of Fire.Your heavy preference for the will of fire pre-academy has dramatically informed the tone of everything that has happened so far. Frankly, I'm probably going to drop true ninja points as a concept because I sincerely doubt you guys are going to ever vote to gain them. Will of Fire will probably be refined as the primary boost mechanic in various ways.
>>5794412I have room to improve. Off the top of my head:
>Not describing imagery/engaging the senses enough,I'm letting Bing AI do my talking there. That's a weakness because I'm using it as a crutch.
>Too much flat expositionDon't know what to say. Everything seems relevant to me, but I feel like I waste a lot of airtime.
>Secretly worried about writing in more realtime/combat scenarios satisfyingly and with engaging energyYou guys have been influential but not "involved" in Otomo's specific moves because each post has been a several months montage. I want that to change.
Granted, so far we've been in what is essentially EXTENDED character creation. Real shit starts soon. I hope to impart more direct control.
I'll for sure carry you guys through to becoming a chunin at bare minimum. After that, I might slow down as real life gets demanding for me.
I've archived the thread:
https://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive.html?tags=Feeling%20BlueI invite you to vote for it if you're happy with it so far. Getting numbers will really motivate me, even if it's just me being a vain dickhead who wants to see numbers despite me not truly believing the scores are relevant to quality in broad terms.
