>>6063385A lot of the pacing problem are due to me not proofreading enough, and it's always something I struggled with. It's mostly because it feels like I need to end the post with a choice, and sometimes I'm unsure how to end a scene with that in mind. The 3000 words limit on each post doesn't help with that, but I could try to start a new scene in another post instead of having it just be one line break like anything else.
I'm happy people are liking it thus far, since I've decided to not hold back on what I want to write, and slice of life-ish was never my forte.
