>>5949315Thank you for the valid criticism. I end up doing a smut sandwich, it seems. Character stuff, seggs, maybe some more character stuff. I haven't done creative writing in a long time and I read very, very quickly so a few dozen pages of set up? Sure sounds fine. And character stuff is easier to write than the steamy parts. I got like 10 pages of set up in one night but struggled with the sex stuff for days before I said "Fuck it".
I have always had some issues with keeping the correct tense, and being on painkillers for half the time I was writing likely didn't help much, though they did give me a few fun ideas like the plushie. Please feel free to take that. And I operate on porn logic for these. InterDick of Merlin. Yeah that means everyone wants to fuck everyone else, even if in the story that wouldn't fly.
I tried to base some of Raven/Linda on my own experiences. In both directions.This one was actually about 10,000 words less than the Christmas one, I just did double spacing because sticking it in a pdf fucked it's formatting.
