>>5525337>Double God HandFeels good, my brother. Also
>>5525137 shoulda been 'Chapter 1', not '1-1'. Rita's on that shitty mansion level before fighting Elvis. Well... WAS.
Speaking of... (all one action, sorry for breaking it up. Let me know if it's too many details, too--it's your quest and your writing has been pretty great so far!)
>In a moment of startling mental clarity, Rita puts two and two together: Cabalito. A. The girl who watched over her when she nearly witched out... and a nasty witch. Both were residing there last time she visited, along with the potential magical girl who saved her in the first place. Moreover, there'd most-likely be other girls heading that way too--including the one who nearly sent Morko flying to Europe. Even Rita knew that, and she'd be lying to herself if she wasn't a bit intrigued by what had just happened.>Wiping the tears and snot from her face onto her thin sheets, the girl is fueled by the desire to do right by the people who saw fit to help her. Whether it was from some ulterior motive or pity she'll never know, but one thing's for certain:>SOMEthing indirectly killed her PS2, and she was going to pay that debt back in spades. If it repaid the unspoken debt between her and her saviors too, well, all the better.>In a clumsy, but still spirited attempt to channel her OTHER favorite video game character (and first crush) Dante, Rita sheds her sleepwear in favor of her trusty rags-err, STREET CLOTHES and sends a forced, but still endearingly cocky smile in what she assumes is the direction of the tower.>'Th-this party's g-getting crazy...' she mutters as she scurries out of her room and makes for the tower!>What do u guys think of char charts?I think they look good! I can't speak for everyone, but Rita's feels like a marriage between what I kinda imagined and your interpretation of her which has been fantastic so far. Very informative!
