>>5494796>>5494838Thanks for sliding in late, guys...
but, like, unironically. I have a terrible habit of taking vote droughts personally, so coming in late to the party helps remind me that it's just a busy time of year and I need to chill out. The good(?) news is that I think I've settled on fully scrapping and rewriting, so I'll be able to take both of these into account anyhow.
Tentatively writing some more tonight, but even if I publish the update sooner vs. later the POV switch means that options won't be up until Thursday regardless.
>>5494796>maybe we can share Charlottes infectious BELIEF with the GooplordThis in particular is helpful. I was struggling last night to be true to Gil as a miserable bastard while also expressing stuff that lies at the center of the quest, and I think you've really hit on something.
>I just realized this quest is the absolute inverse of Snake Quest for character development.Kinda, yeah. I guess that's what you get when your talking snake deuteragonist is as unfuckable as possible... you get tempted <span class="mu-i">out</span> of evil?
>This quest is so fucking underrated it's criminal.Heh, thanks. I look at things like Space Monke, though, and I think what we've got going on here is pretty decent.
Feel free to shill to your friends, though :^) 