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Okay with the thread still on page 3 I think we can keep going, but I’m gonna take a week-long hiatus to decompress, handle IRL shit, maybe even draw some more art for this quest.
How are you guys liking the quest so far? Based on previous feedback I’ve tried to slow down the pacing a bit, give you more decision points when undertaking an overall task rather than boiling it down to a single macro decision that spawns a multi-post summary. Also tried to come up with thots that had more interesting effects than a simple stat adjustment.
People have criticised my writing in other work as a bit stiff and I’m kinda feeling that here. It seems that outside banter between the voices, characterisation falls a bit flat especially with the waifus. I’m not trying to write (insert work with great characterisation here), but it does irk me a bit. I want you to get invested in the characters, so I can use that to fuck with you but right now it feels Nero effectively lives in his own head. Of course, if you’re here mainly for the voices, then maybe it's not a big deal. IDK. Won’t stop me from running; as long as you guys keep voting I’ll keep writing.
Anyway…
>Favourite waifu? If they’ve been characterized enough for you to get attached.
>Favourite voice?
