>>5966943>How is the story going so far? Is it too slow, too fast? Do I leave enough room for player agency?It's rather slow but it works for me because that's how I like it. I like how you often incorporate different write ins and suggestions into the post.
>How is my writing style? Is it too realistic, too purple, too basic, too mundane?It's fine, although I think you should use italics more often to clearly differentiate the dream and real parts.
>How is the worldbuilding? Do you feel immersed in it, overwhelmed by it, or maybe just indifferent to its lack of depth?It works. The world feels like the sum of its parts and you get the sense of scale. It feels like there's always something happening beyond what we see. Only downside to me is that we never really got the chance to explore the different stations and settlements.
>What about other aspects of the quest? Do you want shorter, more frequent updates or longer, less frequent ones? How do you like my schizophrenic taste in pictures?The proper length of updates are whatever works for you. The images are fine I guess, maybe make them more futuristic (see pic related)? If there's something I want to see more it's Sylvie's personal life. She must have some friends or companions and other things to do.
