Calling the vote now, sorry for the super long wait, machine spirits were feeling especially rebellious lately
Contact Eldrad ahead and warn him you are bringing a second, and tell him of Guozhi's ability, introducing the two ahead of your visit, so as not to be rude:11
Keep an eye out for slavers. While your warning outside of the nearest webway gate remains intact, criminals and villain of their sort rarely take heed of the fates of their fellows.:8
Ask Guozhi about his past lives and how his old sect came to attract the attention and earn the animosity of Jian Qi:5
So You'll contact Eldrad and warn him you're bringing a guest, tell him of Guozhi's ability and introduce the two ahead of the visit, while keeping an eye out for slavers and asking Guozhi of his past lives for a bit of a small talk
writing now
Total votes: 12
>>5794994Brilliant, simply brilliant. Thank you, its perfect.
>>5796306Fantastic music choice. Beautiful opening, really paints the scene
These lines were really powerful
"A love so consuming and burning it would bind all Creation,
A love so pure it would bleach the Warp,
A dream so innocent even Gods would die."
Made me tear up
>>5800051>>5800052Another fantastic choice for music, and record of Ragnarök, so its doubly based. Chaos dorn is terrifying, btw, loved how you wrote him
The ending gave me chills
