>>5936515>Maybe you will actually kill him when you both meet. Maybe it's what he deserves.Glad to see that my repeated cries to kill the guy are being represented in the form of intrusive thoughts. Seems like Mark has some points in half light after all.
>>5936522>I don't know. The only thing I do know is that this city does have good people in it and they need to be protected from people like you.">>5936540It's pretty ok. The "evil superman" and "darkseid invasion threat" are less grounded and more comic book, but those are not the actual things we deal with, just spooky vague threats, so it's fine. I like the SIM as our nemesis(meaning I hate him, good job), I like dealing with Dent and politics(meaning I hate it, good job) and I like the cop gang.
Gotham being a weird shitty surreal city made out of gothic urban legends is always cool, and my preferred take on the place, but you don't HAVE to include a gargoyle into every scene. I'd say just add some flavor/ambience when you write locations, and you're good.
