>>5196616Slowly but surely getting to the point in Sathriel's story where the details in the final beat of the story is coming together. Dialogue is easy, descriptors are surprisingly hard to write without going fully overboard in purple prose. Scope creep was and is a definite problem. But with persistence, I might be able to finish it tonight, muse willing. I do have a question however: Do you want me to post the short story at the end of the vein? or do you want me to post it as a separate link doc?